A Light in the Tower
Autor: abgemeldet
Erstellt: 23.10.2007
Letzte Änderung: 13.11.2007
Letzte Änderung: 13.11.2007
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Englisch
17787 Wörter, 5 Kapitel
17787 Wörter, 5 Kapitel
Thema: Nightmare before Christmas
Genre: Abenteuer
Sally had two dreams: to meet personally the misterious Pumpkin King and to take part in Halloween festivities. Both dreams seemed impossible...until the Pumpkin King himself beats on her door.
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First of all, I really like your writing style. Something new and fresh. ^^
And I think the charakters are mostly IC.
Just one thing was a bit unneccesarry, in my opinion, and that were the songs from Hunchback. :)
Could have left them out.
But beside of soem grammar errors, the story is quite good.
Hatschepsa
And I think the charakters are mostly IC.
Just one thing was a bit unneccesarry, in my opinion, and that were the songs from Hunchback. :)
Could have left them out.
But beside of soem grammar errors, the story is quite good.
Hatschepsa
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